Just for fun... will you please read and comment?

This was not a 'for fun' read; it was simply too soulful for that. I loved it, and I love the anitquated language that is mindful of The King James Bible - grew up with it and prefer it. I also use this language in some of my own writes; it just feels comfortable and romantic. Absolutely loved this! (Now cut out the self-doubt, kay? BG has spoken, for whatever that's worth.)